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Saturday, July 27, 2013

#23 Dawn on the Coast (or Indecisive Dawn: Shall I Stay or Shall I Go Now?)

It is technically Tory's turn to snark, but she left to go camping for a week and anyone camping with four boys (yes, I included her husband) needs a vacation after the vacation.


And it's Dawn on the coast.  Just another reason maybe Sharon should have TRIED to stay in California for her kids’ sake. 
The cover is unremarkable, other than that Dawn looks like she’s wearing granny panties and a sports bra on the beach instead of a swimsuit.  Come to think of it, I think I had something that looked a lot like that when I was a kid…
We start with a note from Dawn’s dad saying he’s happy she’s coming to spend spring break with him.  The next page says, “First off, you’re probably wondering who Sunshine is.”  Well, based on the title, I’m guessing it’s you, Dawn!  I really hate it when authors do that.  Just say, “So my dad calls me sunshine,” or “Dad nicknamed me Sunshine when I was little.”  It just seems so contrived!!  We get our chapter 2 introductions out of the way and Dawn’s mom comes home.  She’s a little misty at Dawn being gone, but says she’ll be fine.  They decide to forgo the barley casserole and go out for dinner at Cabbages and Kings, a vegetarian place in town.  The way Sharon talks, it sounds like she misses California too…which again begs the question why she left.  There must have been something Ann’s not telling us!
Another chapter, another note.  I also find these kinds a books so slow.  If the chapter is going to tell us what’s happening anyway, why bother?  It’s so tedious I generally skip them and actually read the chapter.  Apparently any time anyone goes away for a vacation, there has to be a party, so they have a sleepover going away party at Kristy’s mansion.  Of course Karen is there for the weekend too so we have to put up with her Ben Brewer ghost nonsense.  They all squee and squidge together as girls a wont to do and generally have a good time.  Dawn promises MA a post card and lo and behold, the next chapter starts with a postcard entry to her from the plane.  It’s an unremarkable flight with a rude flight attendant.  Her dad, Jeff and her best friend Sunny meet her at the gate and Sunny promises a surprise the next day at 5pm.  Don’t be late, Dawn!
Dawn’s trip starts with a day at Disney.  She has a really good time with Jeff and her dad.  As the day goes on, it becomes more and more apparent to her that she really has missed Jeff and her dad. 
So, adter a lovely day at Disney, Dawn heads to Sunny’s house for her surprise.  Tada!  It’s the we <heart> kids club!  They have meetings, but things are way more laid back than the BSC.  No officers, no calling back clients after arguing over who gets a job, no uptight idea hound heading the ship AAAAND no junk food!
Dawn gets another letter from MA about a sitting job with the Newtons/Feldmans and Perkins kids.  The only remarkable thing about this chapter is that it references the immunities babies get from nursing.  Why isn’t that mentioned more in these books?  Couldn’t give equal time to the boob?  Ooops, said boob.  Ahhhhh…..maybe that’s why
Another postcard, another perfect California day for Dawn.  She is spending the day at the beach with her family and friends.  Her dad strikes up a conversation with her about life and Dawn is a little glum.  It’s becoming obvious she doesn’t like having her family split up, that she really misses her Dad and Jeff and is a little lonely.  After a great day at the beach she calls her mom and they have an awkward conversation.  Dawn is really happy in California but she knows her mom is sad and lonely in Connecticut.  Well… you’re in a divorced family.  Already there are going to be feelings of loneliness.  Add to it the giant split and the 5000 miles separating the two parts of the family and it’s going to be really tough. 
Dawn has a sitting job for Clover and Daffodil and she takes them to a carnival.  As she’s leaving to head home, Jeff comes looking for her to tell her that her mom is on the phone.  Dawn realizes that she hasn’t thought about most of the people back in Connecticut all day long and she wonders what that means.  Well, it could mean you’re having a good time and enjoying yourself on your vacation.
Jessi’s scrawl is on the next postcard.  She sits for Karen, Andrew and DM and of course Karen is all about Ben Brewer again.  At the end of the chapter we get another reference to the impending adoption of EM.
Dawn is at Sunny’s for another We <heart> Kids Club meeting and they’re talking about some of the kids they sit for.  The way they’re talking is almost like…mothers talking, not teens.  The other girls arrive and they hang out, working on healthy recipes for the kids they sit for and talking about Dawn’s old classmates.  Sunny’s mom invites her to stay for dinner and Dawn wonders if she could just stay forever.  Dawn kind of runs out of the room at the end of the meeting to get home to talk to her dad.
Dawn is so very torn.  She doesn’t want to leave Jeff.  She doesn’t want to leave her Dad.  She doesn’t want to leave California, the We <HEART> Kids Club and her friends here.  But she loves her mom.  She approaches her Dad with the idea over dinner and he is excited to have her out there, but cautions her about some of the possible setbacks.  And, apparently, Sharon still technically has custody of Jeff even though he’s living in Cali.  I thought they had taken care of that in book 15?  I dunno.  Anyway, Dawn tells her dad not to call her mom yet until she knows what she wants.  Jeff is super excited and wants Dawn to be there with him all the time and prattles on about all these things they can do together again.  Now Dawn, perhaps you should have brought this up with your father privately, especially since you don’t seem to know what you want to do?  She tries to call MA, but she isn’t home.  Dawn realizes she just wants to talk to her mom and have her help her figure out her emotions.  She wants her family back.
Kristy writes the next postcard about sitting at the Pike’s.  Did you know you can write secret messages with milk and use an iron to make the letters stand out?  I used to have a whole book on how to write different types of secret messages. I wonder how many kids today use secret messages.  They probably all just text. The postcard ends with Kristy telling Dawn that Nicky Pike misses her.
Dawn has a letter from her mom that tells her she’s excited to see her.  She also mentions she’s going to a lecture on humor.  Seriously Ann?  A lecture on humor?  Wow…Anyway, Dawn goes over to Sunny’s house to talk to her about it, but of course Sunny is going to tell her to stay.  Sunny ends up backhandedly insulting some of Dawn’s Connecticut peeps, which peeves Dawn, so she heads home.  Dad wants to know if she’s made up her mind and he needs to know by the next day at the latest.  Dawn lays on her bed to think, missing her mom and MA and wishing she could just bring them to California with her.  At the end of the chapter, she’s made up her mind.  And we don’t get to know what her decision is, only that she sleeps the whole night undisturbed.
She tells her dad the next day that she’s going back to Connecticut and he smiles and says he knew she would.  Then she calls her mom and asks her if MA can come to the airport too and her mom asks why she’s so shaken up.  Dawn explains everything and Sharon is pretty supportive, even telling her to seriously consider moving back if she wants to.  Dawn says she coming home.  She breaks the news to everyone else and while Sunny is sad, Jeff is angry with her.  Well, duh.  On Dawn’s last night in Cali, they go out for dinner and Jeff asks if she’s not staying because they’re boys.  Oh, honey.  Dawn explains her reasoning and they’re back to their happy sibling relationship. 
Dawn leaves the next morning and lo and behold, evil flight attendant is back so Dawn moves seats.  This is in the era of flying when a) you were allowed to do that and b) there were actually empty seats on a plane   She sleeps through much of the flight, although she’s awake for the movie Adventures in Babysitting.  This is an actual movie and I think I’ve seen parts of it, but I’m not sure.  It gets 6.6 at IMBD if anyone wants to watch it.
There is a lot of avocado love in this book.  Dawn even brings avocados back for her mom.  Were avocados not in the store in the late ‘80s?  Just not in the stores in Connecticut?  They way they talk, California is the only place to get an avocado.  Anyway, not only does Sharon bring MA to the airport, but the whole club is there to greet her!  They somehow manage to squeeze back into Sharon’s car and head home.  Dawn is happy to be back.  Yay!

Now, throughout this book I’ve been trying to figure out what kind of vegetarian Dawn is.  She’s not a lacto-ovo vegetarian because she eats fish.  She’s not a pescatarian because she eats eggs and some dairy.  Perhaps she’s macrobiotic or maybe a flexitarian.  It’s so hard to know!!

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