#12 Claudia and the New Girl (or The Traitor and the Threat to the BSC and its Existence)

At last the fates have smiled upon the faithful readers and I drew a Claudia book, probably one of my least favorite in the series.  My 11-year-old has been reading my books before I snark them and after she read this one she said to me, “Mom, I’m glad I don’t have friends like this.  These girls are mean!”  I guess I don’t have to worry about her joining any cultish clubs when she’s 13. 

The cover is unremarkable and there’s no indication who did the artwork.  What is interesting is the dedication.  It’s “for the loyal readers of The Babysitter’s Club series.”  Well, if you’re not a loyal reader, go jump in a creek; this book’s not for you.

The book starts with Claudia watching a fly during English class instead of paying attention.  She admits she doesn’t care about or try hard in school, even though she acknowledges that the teacher is trying to make things interesting.  She gets cold called (teacher speak for calling on a kid out of the blue to draw them back into class discussion) and her lack of enthusiasm or effort results in a surprise spelling test.  During the test, a new student is ushered into the room and introduced as Ashley Wyeth.  Claudia is instantly shocked to see that Ashley is dressed like a hippie and has three pierced earrings in each ear! C’mon Ann, go for the real shock effect and give the girl a nose or eyebrow ring.  Better yet, say she has a nipple piercing and leave us all wondering how Claudia can see that at first glance.  Claudia can’t get over her looks or her name – she may be related to a famous painter with the same last name. Squee!!!  At the end of class, Ashley asks Claudia how to get to her next classroom and as Claudia shows her, she asks Ashley about her name.  Well now, what do you know?  They’re not related, but Ashley’s an artist too.

They have no more classes together that day, but Claudia does a brief intro of the club and its members before it’s time for the meeting.  She chats with Mimi for a few minutes while she waits for the club members (back when they still rang the doorbell before barging in) and mentions that she thinks she and Ashley might become friends.  FORESHADOWING!  Not subtle either.  The girls all arrive and they have a good meeting, with Claudia scheduling a job with the Rodowsky boys.  More foreshadowing when she says she doesn’t know what she’d do without her friends or the club.  Have a life?  Do schoolwork?  More time for art?

Claudia goes to her art class the following day and finds Ashley is there as well.  She is blown away by Ashley’s portfolio of work and Ashley is quite complementary of Claudia’s work as well.  The teacher announces a new art gallery is opening in Stoneybrook and that there is a sculpture competition. They are encouraged to enter as there is a grand prize of $250 and their pieces will be on display the week the gallery opens.  Claudia wants to enter, but isn’t sure she has time.  Ashley insists she does.

Sitting chapter!  Claudia’s at the Rodowsky house.  Jackie drops Rice Krispies on the floor and locks himself in the bathroom with his hand stuck in the tub drain.  An eventful sitting job.  They’re outside playing when who should stop by but Ashley.  Turns out she lives next door and she manages to needle Claudia into committing to the art show.

The next chapter starts with an explanation that in the previous year, the members of the BSC had their own separate groups of friends they ate lunch with, but once Dawn arrived they kind of grew together and this school year they started sitting together.  Well, Ashely wants to sit with Claud and discuss art. Alone. Claudia politely lets her friends know she’s sitting elsewhere for the day, although she’s worried about what everyone would say about her “defecting.”  Seriously?!  She can’t have one lunch period with someone else without your self worth being questioned?  Anyway, they decide to go to an art gallery that afternoon and Claudia ends up being 15 minutes late for a BSC meeting.  Everyone’s there and they grill Claudia about why she didn’t call and why she was having fun with someone other than them.  Wow.

Another sitting chapter.  Dawn sits for the St. Perkins family and ends up having to go to school to get Jeff because he’s in trouble.  This is where she meets Ms. Besser.  Things aren’t looking good for Jeffrey.

Claudia is sitting with Ashley at lunch again and missing the BSC across the room.  Ashley interrupts her thoughts by saying she’s going to sculpt an inanimate object and she thinks Claudia should too.  They spend the afternoon looking for inspiration in items around town.  Claudia gets drawn in, and decides to miss a meeting of the BSC.  She calls Dawn to let her know. 

The next chapter starts with a notebook entry calling Claudia a traitor.  Honestly, these girls …I can’t even put into words.  How is she a traitor?  It’s not like she’s sharing “club secrets” with the enemy or passing off clients to another business.  SHE’S WORKING ON AN ART PROJECT.  What I want to know is why Claudia didn’t just decide to take a little time off from the club like Mallory did when she had her writing contest.  The club members certainly understood about that.  It’s not like they’re overwhelmed with business at the moment; she could take a little time off.  But no, she’s a traitorous bitch, intent upon ruining the club and spending time with someone who wears BELL-BOTTOM JEANS TO SCHOOL.  Stacy starts crying, as she thinks Claudia doesn’t like her anymore, so of course MA starts crying too.  This I can understand; they’re hurt and don’t understand why Claudia’s pulling away.  But to call her a traitor….

The next day the BSC confronts Claudia at her locker while Ashley is there and Claudia’s “friends” basically argue about her responsibilities; to her art, to the club and such.  MA states that Claudia has plenty of time for her art and Claudia muses that her friends really don’t get it.  Perhaps that sentence speaks volumes in and of itself.  Why spend time with people who don’t get you?  They establish that Claudia is not quitting the club and that she is working on a sculpture.

But of course, Claudia misses another meeting and the girls get nasty.  Apparently she was supposed to be working on late English assignments, but she just can’t say no to Ashley and ends up looking for inspiration again.  She ditched Stacey to do homework, bur when she calls Dawn, she tells her where she is. So the girls write mean little notes and hide them around her room, short sheet her bed and eating all her junk food.  After that, I’d lock the door to my house and room and tell them to take a flying leap.  Abusing my personal property?  No, thank you.  The girls muse at the end how good of a friend Ashley is to Claudia, because she seems to only like Claudia because she’s an artist.  Aren’t they doing the same thing?  They’re calling her a traitor and vandalizing her room because she’s placing a personal interest in front of the club.  I wonder if Ann really thinks that what she wrote in this chapter is justified.  Hey, if I don’t like what my friend is doing, I can just leave her some nasty notes in her room (or FB wall) and eat her junk food.  That’ll learn her.

Claudia is sitting for the Rodowsky boys again.  She has just finished digging socks out of the vacuum cleaner when Ashley arrives.  They begin to argue about how Claudia doesn’t take her art seriously enough and how she should be grateful to Ashley for mentoring her.  There are several quotes here that are applicable to Ashley, yes, but also the BSC members.  Quote 1: “You think I owe you something?  Friends are friends because they like each other, not because they’re in debt.”  Perhaps the best friends she’ll ever have should also remember that before they start to graffiti her walls.  Quote 2: “You shouldn’t make up conditions for friendship.”  Self explanatory.  After her argument with Ashley, Claudia realizes what a lousy person she is for having a hobby and friend outside of the club.  Granted, she did shirk some responsibilities and was a little mean to Stacy, but I would not expect her to practice self flagellation over that.  She settles the boys in front of the TV (GASP!) while she tries to figure things out.  Jackie comes in, needing help with his shoelace and Claudia decides she wants to sculpt him.

She arrives the next afternoon while MA is sitting to talk to Jackie and make sketches of him.  While she’s doing that, MA starts asking questions about if Ashley is Claud’s best friend now and what’s she up to.  While Claud is sketching, Ashley comes over AGAIN and interrogates her about what she’s entering in the show and how her choice is awful.  Claudia basically tells her that she’ll sculpt what she wants and Ashley lets her know that she thinks Claudia’s ruining her career before she storms out of the house.  MA asks if Claudia is coming to the meeting, but she’s behind in school and needs to get things done at the library.

That night Claudia makes a list of things she needs to do, starting with calling Ashley, Stacy and Kristy.  She explains herself to Ashley; Ashley hangs up on her.  She explains herself to Stacy; Stacy forgives her.  She explains herself to Kristy; Kristy is short with her and gets off the phone soon.

The next list is for the art show.  She talks to her parents and her art teacher; with homework, she’s just not going to have enough time to finish her sculpture of Jackie, so she’s not entering the art show.

The last list is schoolwork and she tackles that the best she can, while finding a note in her pencil jar likening her to Benedict Arnold and the Wicked Witch of the West.  Nice.

Monday Claudia’s at the meeting and makes a big apology to everyone for being so terrible.  Now, as I stated before, Claudia did some things wrong, but she is not the only one who needs to apologize.  Her friends were terrible to her and nowhere in this chapter do they say they were wrong or that they’re sorry.  Sigh.  At the end of the chapter Claudia says, “If we didn’t like baby-sitting, we would still be friends.”  I say no, probably not.  Aside from Stacy, you have little in common with the other girls besides baby-sitting and in this one dimensional world, it’s not enough.

Claudia gets a surprise phone call from her art teacher informing her that she’s entered Claudia’s partially finished sculpture.  The BSC and the Kishis go to the show.  Ashley won grand prize, of course, for her sculpture of a fire hydrant.  Claudia is surprised to see she got an honorable mention for her work and her teacher feels that had she finished, she would have won.  Yay Claud!

The next day at school, Claudia sees Ashley alone at lunch and invites her to sit with the BSC.  They all tolerate each other (although Ashley’s clothes are weird again) and Claud muses that she and Ashley did become friends.  Sometimes these things just happen.  And now I will go hug my daughter and thank her for her common sense.

#4 Mary Anne Saves the Day

Well, it’s the luck of the draw that I land another MA book.  Mary Anne saves the day.  Hoorah.  I think this is one MA book that I liked because she wasn’t too overly smarmy.

Cover: MA sitting by an ill Jenny P, looking at the thermometer concernedly.  I’d be concerned too in a house with that striped of a couch and nothing on the walls.  It’s actually a scene in the book, so Hodges got it right.  Oh, wait, it isn’t Hodges, it’s Joel Iskowitz.  Excellent.

The book gets right into it.  They are all at their meeting and are offering around jobs when the Newtons call and BAM!  Kristy accepts the jobs without offering it to anyone else.  Suddenly all the girls are fighting with each other, accusing each other of job hogging, being conceited, bossy and (of course) a shy crybaby.  Well, that does it.  MA tells everyone off and walks out.  Yes, the shy crybaby.  I’ve always hated how MA is portrayed as being shy and timid, but she’s assertive when she wants to be (or when the plot line calls for it).  Most shy people don’t tell of their friends and storm out, do they?  I’m not shy, so if you’re shy, help me out!

MA slams home and starts dinner.  She manages to calm down and compose herself before her dad gets home and they start to eat dinner.  Boo-Boo Alert  MA’s mom is referred to as “Abigail” in this book; it is changed to “Alma” in other books.  I think I like Abigail better.  The previously mentioned error is nowhere near as painful as the dinner scene.  Eeesh.  Mommy Moment:  Richard has no idea how to talk to his daughter.  He has no idea who she is.  If I were to die, I would hope my husband would make more of an effort with the kids, although they’re boys, so he might get them better.

MA ponders her room (the inside of a cotton candy machine) and how she loves her dad but she wishes things were different.  Well, duh.  Who wouldn’t wish their mother was alive?  Hmmm…don’t answer that.

The next day at school MA tries to be friendly to Kristy, which backfires.  All of them are still mad at each other.  MA writes a nice note to Claudia, which she plans to deliver later.  She sits alone at lunch time, until a blonde girl named Dawn joins her.  They get to talking and MA can tell from the corner of her eye that Kristy is getting angrier.

The next day MA tries stopping for Kristy and gets a door slammed in her face.  Best friends you’ll ever have.  MA gets back at her by waiting for Dawn and smiling at her.  Lovely. THis is likely why Dawn has trouble getting along with Kristy in book 5.  MA heads over to Dawn’s house and they spend the afternoon watching The Parent Trap (The original is the best) and getting to know each other.  Boo-Boo Alert – MA’s mother apparently grew up in Maryland, not Iowa as is portrayed in later books.   I’m thinking Maryland might be more plausible for her and Richard to meet than Iowa, but Bonnie’s from WI and her husband’s from WA, so what do I know?

 MA leaves and arrives at Claudia’s in time for the meeting.  It was another exercise in painful, with Kristy not bothering to show up and the girls drawing straws for jobs.  MA leaves her note for Claudia and they talk later that evening about what they should do.  They each decide to talk to Stacy and Kristy.  MA has to talk to Kristy and is super nervous, but manages to say what needs to be said, so they work out how the club will work while they’re all mad at each other.  (I accidentally typed Krusty instead of Kristy, since the u and i are next to each other…I kind of like it.  Maybe if I snark a Kristy book I’ll do it as Krusty).

MA has a job sitting for Jenny Prezzioso and in this case she actually does act like a brat. Mommy Moment: I don’t have any daughters, but what would posses any mother to dress their daughter in lace dresses all day every day?  They must like doing laundry...or have an excellent dry cleaner  When MA gets home, she decides to bring up a later sitting time with her dad….who just lost a case.  Needless to say, it doesn’t go well.  Common Sense Moment: MA, you need to learn to read the signs and figure out a better time to talk to him about it.  MA decides to talk to Mimi about it and during their conversation, Mimi calls MA “My Mary Anne” just in time for Claudia to hear it…and that is the end of their truce.

MA and Kristy sit for the Pikes together.  It’s tough, since they’re not talking to each other.  The Pikes are late and MA doesn’t get home until after 9pm.  She again asks if he will allow her to sit later, but again he says no.

MA spends the next day with Dawn and they discover that their parents used to date.  They try to guess why they broke up but can’t come to any conclusions.

MA sits for Jenny P and she is quiet and listless.  She falls asleep as MA is reading and MA takes her temperature at 104.  Mommy Moment: I can’t believe Mrs. P didn’t realize her daughter wasn’t feeling well.  104!?  That right there is one heck of an epic fail.  MA calls Dawn, who suggests calling 911 since MA can’t find an adult to drive them to the hospital.  Jenny has a case of strep and the meds start working before her parents arrive. 

MA and Dawn go back to her house and Dawn catches MA sticking her tongue out at Kristy through the window. That, of course, sparks a fight that ends in Dawn leaving in a huff.

MA is so upset by all of this that she doesn’t tell her father about the experience with Jenny until Mrs. P calls to tell him about it.  They have a heart to heart moment and Richard realizes his daughter is growing up before his eyes.  He allows her later sitting privileges on the weekend and he’s even going to let her redecorate her room a little. Common Sense Moment: Did MA ever ask her dad before if she could redecorate or did she just assume?  Remember kids, when you assume, you make an ass of u and me.

The next week starts and MA apologizes to Dawn and they make up.  She also leaves a note for Kristy in her locker apologizing, but Kristy never says anything to her about it.  Earlier, the girls had agreed to help at Jamie Newton’s 4^th birthday party, but none of them are talking to each other.  As the party starts, they start snotting at each other, and then all four of them start pushing and shoving at the bottom of the stairs about who gets to check on baby Lucy.  At this point, Mrs. Newton’s all like, “what the heck, mature my foot” but is apparently so flustered by the 4 year old party guests that she just picks a sitter to check Lucy and doesn’t drop kick the girls out of her house, which I would have done.  As Mrs. Newton goes to get the cake, MA starts pouring punch…all over Kristy.  Claudia picks up a wet napkin and flings it into Stacy’s face, who in return grabs a wet napkin and smushes it into Claudia’s face.  Enter Mrs. Newton with the birthday cake (I will assume she downloaded a pattern for the cake from pintrest, then proceeded to pull her hair out while she tried to make it look like the supermom’s) to see her child with tears running down his cheeks and her “sitters” having a mini food fight.  Mommy Moment:  At this point, I’d say, “Get out, don’t expect to get paid, don’t expect me to call for a sitter ever again.”   MA gracefully gets them through the sticky moment and they’re on their best behavior until the end so that Mrs. Newton doesn’t think they’re “immature” or “irresponsible.”  Newsflash: you are both of those things.  You’re 12. 

MA calls an emergency meeting of the club and declares they are going to the Kishi’s.  She takes a deep breath, remembers how totally awesome she’s become and charges forward.  She declares they either need to make up or break up the club.  Everyone declares that they love each other and apologizes for their flaws…well, they count 1,2,3 and yell “I’m sorry!”  Because they're 12.  Then they apologize for their personality traits that will soon become the epitome of their characters because the ghosties are too lazy to make them dynamic, interesting people.  Sorry, I digress.  They’re all happy and the club is in good shape.

MA dashes home from the meeting in time to catch a call from Dawn.  Apparently she found a prom picture with her mom and MA’s dad.  MA resolves to ask her dad about it at dinner.  After some small talk, she springs the name “Sharon Porter” on him and he chokes on his carrots.  He explains about how they dated, but Sharon’s parents didn’t think he was good enough for their daughter because his family didn’t have much money.  MA subtly asks if he would be good enough now, but he brushes off her comment.  MA calls Dawn back and tells her about the story.  She also asks if Dawn has done much sitting in Cali because she was pretty awesome at Jenny’s and she promises to get back to her the next day.

So MA has a BSC party at her house, including Dawn.  Her dad actually said yes, and came home to help her organize.  There’s an incident where MA spills soda on her skirt and carrot peels on the floor, which is perfect timing because the doorbell rings and it’s Dawn and her mom.  Sharon and Richard are just standing there staring at each other, and Jack Schafer can quit blaming his divorce on Sharon being disorganized and blame it on the fact that she’s been in love with another man for years.  MA hustles Dawn into the kitchen and they eavesdrop at the door, which is great because they hear the two of them make a date.  For the next evening.  Dinner.  Ooo lala.

MA gets cleaned up and calmed down as everyone else arrives and they troop to her room to talk. MA asks if Dawn can join the club.  They ask her some questions about her experience, how late she can stay out and any emergencies she handled.  They vote her in and run downstairs to get their pizza.  They have a pizza toast (a hamburger patty for Stacy, because the processed cheese on pizza will kill her…according to the ADA, diabetics can eat cheese, but they recommend watching portion size due to saturated fats) and Dawn squees over being accepted into the BSC.  Just you wait, Dawn.  Just you wait.

#16 Jessi's Secret Language

Jessi starts her book by stating she’s good at languages.  I really wish this would have been brought up in her traits in following books instead of the standard black, ballet, loves horses line.  Apparently she’s so good at them, she almost became bilingual during the week her family spent in Mexico.  Again, if she’s that good, I think this warrants more mentioning.

Jessi gets up early, goes downstairs to her barre and thinks about the recent move, and how her family being black has been tough for them here.  Then she starts thinking about the tryouts for a ballet in the area called Coppelia that she is trying out for.  I’m imagining something like the end of White Christmas when they’re all singing and the kids start dancing in front of them.  Anyway, everyone else wakes up and they start their day.

Jessi dashes in late to the BSC meeting and doesn’t get eaten alive.  Instead we get the chapter 2 summary of everyone.  And why is it that every Jessi book always has a vocabulary lesson?  Introspective is our word of the book here.  There is a call from a new family in the area named the Braddocks, who have a deaf child. They need a regular sitter and would really like for the sitter to know sign language.  Jessi gets the job and she’s really excited.

We meet Jessi’s ballet class and get a little background knowledge about how things work there.  It’s interesting to find out that not everyone in the class likes Jessi, which turns out to be important 30 books later.  Jessi lands the lead role in the ballet and some of the other dancers, Katie Beth and Hillary, are pretty nasty about it, insinuating she got the role because she’s the newest dancer in the class.  Jessi kind of lets it get under her skin, but she and her mother have a talk about the school and its qualifications and she moves on from it and focuses on her new sitting charges,

She has her first training with the Braddock family and meets Haley first.  What strikes me is that Haley is described as having a rattail. I hate rattails.  Moving on.  Mrs. B and Haley start teaching Jessi “Ameslan”, the outdated term used in this book for American Sign Language.  I shall refer to it as ASL hereafter.  (Too much Downton Abby!)  Matt arrives home in the middle of the session and he and Haley disappear while Mrs. B teaches Jessi the basic signs she would need to know to sit.  Jessi goes to get to know the kids, but Matt wants to read.  Haley gets a little upset that Jessi seems more interested in Matt than her….hmm….

The next chapter MA is sitting for Jenny P.  Most of the time Jenny’s not being all that bratty, but this chapter’s pretty bad.  She makes fun of Matt when they’re out on a walk. I have no time for children who pick on other kids, or their parents. Haley gets upset and storms off – Jessi realizes that Haley’s having a hard time adjusting to her new neighborhood and Matt’s deafness isn’t making it any easier.

Finally the big day comes: Jessi’s sitting alone for the first time.  Mrs. B is (rightfully) a little nervous, but she manages to pull herself away.  After snack, Jessi takes the Braddocks over to the Pike house.  Vanessa and Nicky close in age to Haley and Matt, so Jessi thinks it might be a good match.  The Barretts are there as well and the introductions begin…along with the staring.  So Jessi introduces ASL as a secret language and instantly the kids are intrigued, so much so that Haley stays there teaching signs after Matt and Jessi head back to the Braddocks’ house.

The next chapter is a sitting chapter.  Mallory and Dawn are sitting for Mal’s siblings and they are quite wild, until they send the kids off to play and the house gets quiet.  Turns out they are practicing sign language and making up signs of their own.

Jessi’s part in Coppelia is a lot of work but she’s been putting in extra time and everyone notices in her dancing.  Her naysayers are even being…civil to her.  She’s waiting for her dad after practice and sees Katie Beth with her sister, Adele.  Turns out Katie Beth’s sister is deaf, but her family doesn’t much know ASL.  Jessi spends a little time showing her signs and Katie Beth seems to be interested.

Another sitting chapter!  Claudia sits for DM, Karen and Andrew.  Karen starts scaring Andrew, so Claudia distracts them with ASL.  She ends up calling Jessi a few times and Karen tries to tell a ghost story using ASL.

Jessi continues to her busy schedule, sitting and dancing.  As she spends more time with Haley, she finds out that Haley feels responsible for Matt, helping him make friends and defending him.  She resents all she has to do for him sometimes, because it makes her feel like an outsider too.  Haley mentions at one point that Matt’s never been to the theater and that sparks an idea in Jessi’s mind.

At the next BSC meeting, Jessi works on teaching the other sitters more about ASL and finger spelling.  During the meeting Mrs. B calls to tell Jessi “everything is arranged.”  Oooo….a secret.  Then she surprises everyone by telling them they’re invited to her performance of Coppelia. 

The next day Mrs. B picks Jessi up from school and takes her to Matt’s school.  Jessi makes a little signed speech inviting the students in Matt’s class to the ballet as well.  The students are very excited.

A sitting chapter!  Kristy sits for Jessi’s sister and brother and discovers that there’s a secret a-brewin’…Kristy doesn’t like to be left out of secrets.

Jessi finally tells everyone what she arranged for Matt’s class…and I wonder to myself why she kept it a secret.  It’s not as though it made a big difference.  I’m still puzzling over it myself. Anyway, it’s opening night and Jessi’s a little nervous, hoping everything goes well.  Mrs. B is signing and Haley is narrating before each act so that the deaf students can enjoy and understand the ballet better.  The ballet goes beautifully, Jessi does a wonderful job and the students really enjoy the ballet.  It turns out Katie Beth’s sister is in the audience and Katie Beth has been taking sign language lessons to communicate with her.  Yay her.

After the ballet, Jessi and her friends get together and surprise!  Jessi’s cousin Keisha is there as well.  This was the other secret Becca didn’t share with Kristy.  After everyone gets settled and has hugged, kissed, and cried, they all go out for dessert.  What better way to end a book than with dessert?

Mommy Moments:

• If I were the parent of a deaf child, I would expect my sitter to know sign language.  I know that would be a high qualification, but that would be up there on my “must haves” list.
• Just a thought:  Jessi mentions how expensive her toe shoes are, but that her parents are more than willing to buy them, even though she doesn’t plan to be a professional.  How much money would you put into something you know may not have a specific future for your child?  Just curious.
• Go Mama Ramsey!  She a)notices something bothering her child and b)addresses it with her daughter.
• Boo to the family of Katie Beth and Adele.  She’s your child, for Pete’s sake.  Learn ASL so you can communicate with her, even if she is in a special school most of the time.  I can’t imagine not making every effort to communicate with my child.

#5 Dawn and the Impossible Three

I drew Dawn.  This is her third book snarked and poor Claudia, one of the founding five has only been snarked once!!  Soon the odds will be ever in her favor…

So, I blame this book for my incessant need to have a clean house before any sitter comes over.  Most of the time, Dawn is whining about how messy Mrs. Barrett’s house is, so I have this phobia that if any of my sitters see the house in disarray, they are going to consider myself and my children “impossible.”  The other reason is that at the beginning of the book, Dawn (partially) blames the divorce on her mother’s disorganized habits.  Her father “just couldn’t live with it.”  Sorry, IMO disorganization is not a good reason for a divorce.  Just sayin’.

Looking at the cover, it looks like Dawn is with some ordinary kids in a not so messy house.  Impossible, you say…well, let’s just dive in and see, shall we?

After a relatively brief introduction, we find that Dawn is sitting for just a few of the Pike kids.  After her short and succinct chapter two descriptions, she meets Buddy and Suzi Barrett when Suzi falls on the front steps.  Dawn fixes the owie; soon after Mrs. Pike arrives and Dawn leaves for Mary Anne’s house.  Exciting news there – Dawn’s mom and MA’s Dad are on a dinner date!  They head over to Claudia’s house - they still are polite at this point and ring the bell – and talk briefly with Janine.  Why they make such a big deal about Janine, I don’t know.  Maybe because she’s Ted Mosby.  They start the meeting, MA gets a job with the Prezzioso “brat” Jenny and Dawn gets a job with a new client – the Barretts.  She’s excited because she’s a kid of divorce and the Barretts are just going through a divorce and it’s just meant to be.

When she gets home her mom is running out for her date, so it’s just Dawn and Jeff for dinner.  Just as Dawn is getting ready to eat, MA calls and tells her that she gets to redecorate her room and Dawn offers some of the extra furnishings they brought with them from Cali.  The next day she hauls them over to MA’s house and they start checking them out.  Kristy looks over and sees them together and MA invites her over.  Kristy gives Dawn the cold shoulder and tries to muscle her out, which worries Dawn.

Kristy continues to give Dawn the cold shoulder and Dawn realizes Kristy is jealous and feels left out now that MA has another friend.  Really?  Did it just now occur to you? 

The next day Dawn sits for the Barretts (Buddy, Suzi and Marnie) for the first time and she is greeted by actual children, not the Stoneybrook Stepford Kids.  They are messy and their clothes are askew (for lack of a better word).  What would you expect of children in the afternoon?  Unless it’s Jenny P, I’m guessing most normal kids aren’t perfectly spotless after being awake most of the day and their hair isn’t going to be perfect either.  Mrs. Barrett rushes into the room and rushes out – failing to leave Dawn any instructions.  Now, I get the need for emergency numbers (posted by the phone) where I’ll be and a schedule.  If I don’t have everything perfectly laid out, I would hope my babysitter would be able to function…I have my doubts about Dawn’s abilities.  She has the kids help her clean the house and then she does their hair.  By the end of the job, they start talking about divorce and how daddies never come back and Suzi starts crying and calls Dawn a liar.  Now I get that Dawn just went through divorce too, but I don’t want my sitter getting into a deep discussion with my child about something that’s personal.  Especially not my four-year-old.  I think I’d be a bit perturbed if I found out about this.

The next chapter is a sitting chapter and Kristy is sitting for Karen and Andrew.  The point I found interesting is that Kristy insists on talking to the parents of Karen’s friend Hannie before she comes over.  Apparently sitters are supposed to include parents in their plans.  I guess that gets lost as the series moves on.

Dawn decides she has to do something about Kristy, so she invites her over to spend the afternoon at her house.  They end up having a good time and the tension between the two of them subsides a bit.

Dawn’s next sitting job with the Barretts is all day and when Dawn gets there at 8:15, the girls are still in their jammies and she starts twigging out a little.  On the weekends, we don’t get the kids out of their jammies until 9, unless they want to get dressed.  Relax, Dawn!  After Mrs. Barrett leaves, Dawn prepares a mental schedule, since she’s meeting up with Claudia and Stacy for a picnic lunch.  Of course the schedule doesn’t go as planned, but they manage to make it to the picnic with brownies that they made.  As Dawn goes to give Marnie one, Mallory grabs it out of her hand, informing Dawn that Marnie is allergic to chocolate.  Yes, this is a big thing that she should have been informed of.  At the end of the job, Dawn decides she’s going to complain to Mrs. Barrett about her 4 grievances:

1. She never gives instructions (ok, I’ll give her that one)
2. She hardly pays attention to her children (a. not her business and b. how does she know?  She’s not there all the time)
3. She is disorganized (not affecting you that much, so I say no)
4. She’s only paying Dawn for sitting, not for housecleaning (which she never asked Dawn to do – it was Dawn’s choice to do it).

The next chapter is a Claudia sitting chapter and I had to check the chapter to find out whose entry it was, because the writing is fairly neat and, while she makes a few grammatical and spelling errors, she does not seem illiterate.  And we don’t actually read about her job with Jeff; the chapter is about Dawn’s woes with the Barretts.  She’s spending more and more time there, to the point that Mrs. Barrett says she’s the “glue holding us all together.”  This is where I look at DAWN’s mom and wonder why she doesn’t put her foot down and tell Dawn to cut back, especially after the whole Schafer family catches the stomach flu when Suzi is sick and Mrs. Barrett leaves the wrong phone number.  Buddy is also struggling with needing Mom time, especially with his special homework.

We have another sitting chapter that sets up the next book.  Stacy is sitting David Michael and he’s worried about moving across town to Watson’s house.

Dawn and her mom decide tohave a picnic for Memorial Day and somehow Dawn convinces her mom to get hot dogs and hamburgers.  MA’s dad and Dawn’s mom make goo-goo eyes at each other, to the slight annoyance of Dawn’s grandparents, but they come around as the day passes.

MA is the next to sit for the Barretts and she calls them terrors.  I call them kids who have been cooped up in a house during 3 days of rain.  There is a strange call from Mr. Barrett, setting up the next chapter.

Dawn’s sitting for the Barretts again and it’s finally stopped stopped raining.  She sends Buddy outside while she gets the girls ready and when she gets outside, Buddy is gone.  That is every parent/sitter’s worst nightmare. Dawn starts calling around hoping he went to someone’s house, but to no avail.  The neighbors start a search, but when Jordan Pike returns from his piano lesson and reveals that Buddy got into a car, Mrs. Pike calls the police.  The police arrive, question Jordan and start a neighborhood canvass.  Dawn gets a call from Buddy saying he’s with his dad and on his way home. Mrs. Barrett arrives home in the midst of this and finds out what happened.  Shortly afterward, Buddy and his dad arrive.  The story is that Mr. Barrett was so frustrated with Mrs. Barrett’s inability to keep the custody schedule straight and he decided to teach her a lesson. 

Dawn talks to Mrs. Barrett the next day and tells her she can’t do all that she has been doing and Mrs. Barrett agrees.  It’s also a good idea for Dawn to quit encouraging the kids and Mrs. Barrett to take advantage of her.

Everything turns out well and a few days later, Jeff comes to a BSC meeting and takes a picture of the gang for MA’s new room.  Here’s to the best friends you’ll ever have!

Merry Christmas!

Forgive us for being remiss in our snarking, but between shopping, wrapping, baking and shuttling kids to basketball, Christmas program practice and caroling, there's not much time for critical writing.  I can promise you that there is a Dawn book and Jessi book on the horizon.  I'm hoping to draw a Claudia book soon - we need some awesome outfits.  Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

#6 Kristy's Big Day (or as I call it Kristy's Big Week)

So why do I keep drawing the books featuring weddings?  Yes, we draw titles out of a bowl to snark, although everyone gets to pick one favorite.  You were burning with curiosity on that one, weren’t you?  "How do they pick which books to snark?  I have a burning desire to know!"

Beef one I have with this cover is that Kristy looks like she’s in her first year at NYU, not 12 going on 13.  What is it with Hodges over aging these girls?  Beef two: Since when do four-year-old boys tie their own ties?  It appears Andrew is tying his and without the aid of a mirror.  My husband can’t even do that and he’s worn a tie almost every day since he was 25.  The description’s a little corny too.  “Kristy’s a baby-sitter – and a bridesmaid too!”  I’m not going to touch that with a 10 foot pole.

The book starts with a Brewer/Thomas dinner party.  The ghost of Ben Brewer is discussed by Karen.  A September wedding date is announced by Watson and Elizabeth.  Kristy is excited to be a bridesmaid but Andrew declines to be in the wedding.  The stage is set for the rest of the book.

Just four days later, the plans fall through for a two reasons.  Reason one: Elizabeth’s job has her in Europe on the date of the wedding.  Reason two: The Thomas house has sold for the asking price and the buyer wants to move in in mid July.  So Watson and Elizabeth are now getting married in two weeks and they will be moving to the Brewer mansion the end of June.  Elizabeth is rightly panicked and the kids are rightly stunned.  DM and Kristy start whining, but Elizabeth gives them the MOM look.  DM shuts up but Kristy keeps pushing, finally stomping off to her room.  But she’s sad, as she has every right to be.  The move was already going to be a big adjustment for her and now she has very little time to adjust.

Elizabeth starts listing what needs to be done for the wedding in TWO WEEKS and I wonder why they don’t just hop down to the Justice of the Peace to quick get married and then have a big, fancy celebration later on when they’ve had time to plan.  This seems like some rather unnecessary stress.  Kristy comes to help and then is late for a meeting of the BSC.  This is in the days before it was a punishable offense to be less than 5 minutes early for a meeting.  We get all of the chapter two stuff in chapter three, and there’s actually a plot and story, not just as many facts and character traits (ew, diabetes!) as can be listed in eight pages.  Kristy explains the wedding situation, they assign some jobs and talk about the final fling dance.

After the last day of school, Kristy comes home and finds Elizabeth at the kitchen table again looking hysterical.  Apparently “Shelia” and “Kendall” (who later are Lisa and Seth) are going to England the following week and are leaving Karen and Andrew with Watson.  Ok, how many people just randomly go to England for “most of a week”?  This seems like something that would be planned ahead of time, unless it’s through work. I have no idea what “Shelia” does, but I know from the Little Sister books that “Kendall” is a carpenter. Is it a carpentry emergency?  Why do both of them need to go?  I like to think they got wind of the whirlwind wedding and decided to be real asshats and leave the kids with Watson on a moment’s notice.  Anyway, some of Elizabeth’s siblings and one of Watson’s friends are coming early to help with wedding prep and are bringing their children.  This means there will be 14 children getting in the way as they work on wedding prep.  Again, just go to the JoP and party later!  Kristy offers the services of the BSC, Elizabeth offers $600 to the girls and Kristy decides she’ll have an emergency BSC meeting to discuss it.

The next part is kind of unsnarkable because it’s really real, with the insecurities and worries that the kids have about having a stepfamily, moving away, how things will work with Watson.  For once Ann actually thought about what a kid might be feeling.

The next day is the emergency meeting and the girls decide they will take on the 14 children.  They divvy the kids into groups by age and make name tags and such.  Mimi pops in with sodas (POP!) for everyone and offers to help should they have problems next week.  I think Mimi was the universally loved character of the BSC, so of course Ann had to kill her off. :(

On Sunday, Kristy is rousted out of bed early and she and the sibs clean the house in preparation for the arrival of all the family.  Nannie (Elizabeth’s mom) comes over in the afternoon to help as well and Kristy pesters about her dress, since Nannie’s sewing it.  And I wonder if Ann has ever sewn, because Nannie says the dresses are basted together, but a long way from done.  In all the sewing I’ve done (and I made my own wedding dress, so I have some street cred) I’ve never basted an entire dress together before sewing it.  It just wouldn’t work.  There’s no way that would work.

All the family arrives and Kristy starts to panic when she sees just how much trouble the kids get into when there are 10 adults present.  Don’t worry Kristy, this is BSC land.  They’re only naughty for their parents (although there is some truth to that…my kids were always better for the sitter).

The sitters prepare the next morning for the day and then the kids arrive.  No one thought about allergies, medications, nap times, and crying children.  There are 7 kids crying when the adults leave, but the girls get the situation under control and soon things are going along swimmingly.

Five days of kids and the girls do pretty well, with only a few incidents.  Dawn’s group, which includes the “precocious” Karen, goes to the playground and Karen terrifies all the kids with stores of Martians coming to abduct them. The counselors ask them not to return.  Stacy takes her group to see a showing of “Mary Poppins” at the theater and one girl (Emma) loses her money and then drops candy over the balcony railing onto the people below.  The usher ushers them out.  MA and Kristy take the boys to the barber where the boys are just out and out nasty rude to the barbers.  Now maybe I’m an anomaly, but my boys have never hated haircuts as badly as these boys seem to. Yikes!

The last day it rains and they decide to play a pretend wedding, which the kids have a lot of fun with.  We get a mention here of Kristy’s other grandma – is she ever mentioned again in the series?  I’m sure that relationship is pretty strained.  It’s also the day of the wedding rehearsal and each child has a bag of clothes.  Emma decides to be naughty and switches all the clothes around, creating a huge hassle for the sitters.  The girls get things straightened out to the best of their abilities and the kids are presentable when the parents arrive.

Rehearsal is smooth, except Karen is freaked out by having white petals, sure it’s going to clash with “Morbidda Destiny” and her black magic.  This child’s obsession with the supernatural is not normal.  Watson, get her some counseling!  I’m surprised there wasn’t a Little Sister book called “Karen’s Ouija board.”  After the rehearsal dinner, the girls get paid…$120 each plus a $10 tip.  They’re rich!

The next day is the wedding day.  MA comes over to help Kristy get dressed, then the Thomas clan goes to Watson’s to get ready.  The wedding is lovely until “Morbidda Destiny” comes over with a gift.  Karen starts freaking out, Watson claps a hand over her mouth and then she bites him.  That kid.  Not cute.

After the wedding everyone leaves for home, a friend of Watson’s schleps Karen and Andrew back to their mother’s (who is apparently back from England) and Watson and Elizabeth head to Vermont for a week of passion, leaving the Thomas kids home alone.  Kristy has been wondering what to get for a wedding present since about the middle of the book and she finally made up her mind at the wedding.  She makes a family tree showing the joining of the two families, has Claudia help her decorate it and frames it.  Yay!

After the title being Kristy’s Big Day, you’d think there would be more focus on the wedding portion.  Instead it only gets about two chapters.  Oh well, it’s over, they’re married.  If I draw “Here come the Bridesmaids” I’ll shoot my foot.

#10 Logan Likes Mary Anne

Ug…I knew I would have to snark a Mary Anne book, but I am not a fan.  She’s the most passive aggressive and self absorbed of all the girls.  Oh, but I can’t be too harsh on her because her mom died…On to the snark!

“It was the last day of summer vacation….Tomorrow my friends and I would become eighth-graders.”  The first of many times you’ll become an eighth grader, Mary Anne.  Don’t get too excited.

The girls have their last meeting of the summer, which is kind of bittersweet for them.  They dish about Cam Geary, the BSC land heartthrob and MA’s true love.  Mrs. Prezzioso calls and everyone groans about Jenny…honestly, they way they whine about this kid, you’d think she was a hair-pulling, biting, kicking, back-taking terror who spends her time terrorizing the cat and destroying the house.  Anyway, they wrap up the meeting, taking a little longer to say good-bye to summer…

MA arrives for the first day of school, gets her schedule, blah, blah, blah, you remember, all the first day stuff.  That’s been too long ago.  Anyway, at lunch all the girls sit together for the first time, since Claudia and Stacy are so much more sophisticated than the other girls and talk about…boys.  There’s a nasty description of the lunch, which Kristy and MA decide to buy because bagged lunches are not cool.  Needless to say, it doesn’t get eaten.  Mommy Moment: If you aren’t eating it, I ain’t paying for it.   Anyway, MA sees Cam Geary…oh, nope, just a guy who looks like him and knows Stacy.  Behold the green-eyed monster!

Friday brings the next BSC meeting where Kristy gets her next great idea to advertise in the schools where parents will see them at their next PTA meetings.  Dawn suggests fliers at the meeting and then the idea comes up to advertise in Kristy’s new neighborhood.  We can all see where this is headed, right?  The BSC ends up with too many clients for them to handle and they need more help.  Enter Logan Bruno, Cam Geary look alike and lover of children….that doesn’t sound right at all.  He also has a dreamy southern accent.  MA is hooked.  He volunteers to help them out and they invite him to come to a meeting.

MA totally stresses, brushes her hair a million times and panics slightly during the meeting.  Obviously a boy in a group of girls makes for some awkward moments, especially when the topic of bras and some toilet stories.  While Logan is out of the room, all the girls feel this is awkward and worry about asking him to join the club.  He returns and they line up a trial job for Logan with a new client, the Rodowskys.  MA is going to be going with him….bum, bum, bum!

Here we meet Jackie Rodowsky, probably one of the most picked on kids the BSC sits for.  His mother mentions they need to keep an eye on him.  Well, he cannon balls off of the couch, falls from the shower curtain rod, spills an entire cup of juice on the floor, gets his hand stuck in a jar, falls of his bike, rips his jeans, and manages to knock MA into Logan’s arms (like she really minded).  Their day ends with Logan telling MA she has a pretty smile and she melts into a MA puddle.

Claudia has a sitting job with the Perkins girls (pre Laura) and she has an adventure with their dog Chewy stealing a construction worker’s orange cones.  Yawn.

At the next meeting the girls again debate Logan joining the club.  Yes, he’s a good sitter, but he’s a boy and the meeting with him there was miserable.  Still, they need help so they decide to ask him to join.  MA calls him later at home to ask him and he says he’s decided not to join.  On the plus side, he asks her to the Remember September dance and she says yes.

Stacy has the next sitting job for Charlotte Johanssen and Charlotte finds out that MA’s birthday is coming up.  She suggests a surprise party and Stacy (quite wisely) says that’s not a good idea since MA’s so shy.  Then Char says what about a regular party with a surprise cake and Stacy is intrigued.  She starts planning the party and hints to MA that she should invite Logan.

MA’s dad is okay with her going to the dance with Logan and even gives her his charge card for a new outfit.  Mommy Moment: For being strict, I think Richard is pretty easy going.  I don’t know that I would be comfortable with my 13-year-old daughter dating.  Of course, I don’t have a daughter, but still.  Maybe it’s just because I’m a mom, and teen pregnancy ads are everywhere, but 13 seems too young.

MA gets a great outfit and the night of the dance, she actually gets into the gym and over to Logan without freaking out.  It actually seems sort of normal for them to meet at the school; I don’t know if a 13 year old boy would actually get a flower for a girl though.  They dance together and start getting a little groovy when MA’s shoe flies off.  That’s the end of dancing for her and she spends the rest of the dance on the bleachers.  Common Sense Moment: People talk a lot more about you pouting on the bleachers than they do about your shoe flying off.  Learn to laugh it off! (This is another reason why I never liked MA ever).

The next notebook entry is Kristy sitting for her sibs and stepsibs while Dawn is over for a sleepover.  They talk about boys and the fact that MA seems to be maturing and really into Logan while Andrew, Karen and DM fight.

MA and Logan have some awkward phone conversation, Stacy calls and chides her for not asking her father about coming to the party, MA interrupts her father in a meeting to ask him and then calls Logan back to ask him if he would come with her.  Then she calls Stacy to confirm and then Kristy calls MA to talk.  WHEW!  It’s all arranged.

The night of the party MA arrives on time, but everyone else is already there (so they could sneak in their presents).  MA is having a great time with Logan when suddenly the lights dim, a cake comes out, her friends start singing happy birthday and MA runs out of the house and home.,

She sits at home and pretty much pouts, because no one thought about how shy she is and how she would absolutely hate to be the center of attention.  Those heinous bitches, how dare they try to do something special for their friend’s birthday. “I take people seriously, but no one took me seriously.”  Puhleese.  Think about someone else besides yourself for a change.  I’m sorry, but this is why I HATE MA.  Anyway, she sits there thinking Logan or Stacy will call and apologize and invite her back to the party.  They don’t.  She spends the rest of her evening having a pity party and being mad at her friends.

The next morning MA goes downstairs and point blank asks her dad for a cat.  He points out the cons, MA counters it and he says okay.  All he asks is that she take care of it and that she adopt one from a shelter. Mommy Moment:  A pet is not something you can decide on in an instant.  C’mon Richard.

Later MA calls Logan and he says that everyone feels bad and they hope she doesn’t hate them.  She tells him she’s getting a cat and invites him along.  She picks out a gray tiger cat and names him Tigger.  Logan gives her a silver bracelet for her birthday and invites MA to the 50’s fling the next month.  Mommy Moment:  You did not just give my 13-year-old daughter a silver bracelet (even though I don’t have one).  Seriously?  What teen boy would even think of that? 

Then MA calls Stacy and they apologize to each other.  MA invites everyone over to her house the next day to see Tigger.  They bring over some cake and her birthday presents.  She opens her presents while Tigger plays with the wrapping paper.  Everyone has some cake, except Stacy and Dawn goes and brushes her teeth after eating all that refined sugar.  It’s good to know this character trait is cemented early.

At the next BSC meeting the jobs are rolling in and again the girls suggest Logan as a sitter.  Instead of having him be a member, they decided to offer to make him an associate member and call him when they get really busy and need help and he won’t have to come to meetings.  He accepts and MA glows.  She’s so happy!  Yay!  Gag.  I need to go brush my teeth now.